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(Rock) 70 Million Years (Guitar, Keys, Lyrics, Vocals, Arrangement, FX,, The Works)

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8 comments:

Keeper said...

I'll go through the drum track like I'm doing your other one to make the drums move with the progression. It's a good start. Love that you post your separates in the zip like that. Makes it easy for me to do my thing with it. Rock On!

:-)

Inngr8 said...

Is "70 Million Years" a working title, or are you looking for lyrical content to support the title? I have a few ideas and can go with something eons in the past or future - cause this tune is speaking to me (well, more like screaming in my ear). You can feel the apocalypse, either literal or relationship-wise. I have some existing lyrics that could be made to fit - but they are more socio-political rather that scifi, and I'm feeling both. Actually, there is so much potential in this song you can just about start at any point on the compass rose and have the lyrics write themselves. If you could give me some ideas or a direction, I'd like to take a shot writing some lyrics for this - whether or not you use them, it would be a fun exercise.
Phil

Inngr8 said...

Just a few words inspired by several listens to the song.

V1
Ambient fire, spoken desire
Light fills the void
Emergence follows
Timeless action, soulless passion
Down thru the ages
Infinite Sorrows
C1
Butterfly wings set it all in motion
Arrows and slings as we say devotions
Chaos from His fingertips
Chaos from His fingertips

Death from the comets falling around us
Brings extinction now that it’s found us
Chaos from His fingertips
Chaos from His fingertips

Smoke and fire rise up to the Heavens
Angels cry, not a one could save us
Chaos from His fingertips
Chaos from His fingertips

F-Jam Alert said...

This is a reply that Jerry posted. He mistakenly posted directly to the googlegroup instead of the project page:

QUOTE JERRY

Thanks Phil...whatever you come up with would be very cool. It is a
working title and apocalypse would be awesome. See what you can do
and I'm sure it would be fine...thanks.

1oneleo said...
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1oneleo said...

Hi Jerry...
I was working on your song and had a lot of ideas, and wrote the lyrics to.
I upload one audition...but there are some erros (english), thats why I´m brazillian and I´m learning english yet.
I Correct somes erros like (For 70 millions -to- By 70 million) (came -to- come)..but I did´nt have time to make another take (vocal).

Well.. the idea is that:

0:00 INTRO
0:30 Verse 1
0:58 REF
1:40 whisper 1
2:07 Verse 2-1 - Solo
2:37 whisper 2
3:02 Verse 2-2 - Solo
3:29 REF
4:08 Silence
4:23 Verse 1
4:52 Verse 1 mix
5:06 End

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---- Verse 1

I´m watching my world bleeding now, man
It´s all your fault, and you just don´t care
You´re digging your grave, shorting up your days
You thought you was a hunter, but you´re just one pray
Don´t look for gold, search for life
Your gold will stay when you go away
By 70 million years it was all the same
An old life goes to a new one come

---- REF

Do you really think you´re clever
Do you know what really matters?
No way
Do you really think you´re better
You think you´ll gona live forever
No way
Take care of your life
Don´t waste your time

---- Whisper 1

After rain falls
The peace fills the heart of all
It brings a time to renew
And to put our spirits down

---- Verse 2-1

Try to live your days like it was your lasts
The time is now but don´t forget your past
I see a lot of shame but there´s no regret
Take the world

---- Whisper 2

Since the begin of all
The stars are showing our paths
But a blind man will never find
Wich way will take him to the light

---- Verse 2-2

The way is really filled with a lot of traps
But I´m not the one that you have to blame
Through all these years I clean up your craps
What you have to say?

---- REF

Do you really think you´re clever
Do you know what really matters?
No way
Do you really think you´re better
You think you´ll gona live forever
No way
Take care of your life
Don´t waste your time

---- Silence

---- Verse 1

I´m watching my world bleeding now, man
It´s all your fault, and you just don´t care
You´re digging your grave, shorting up your days
You thought you was a hunter, but you´re just one pray
Don´t look for gold, search for life
Your gold will stay when you go away
By 70 million years it was all the same
An old life goes to a new one come


---- Verse 1 mix

I´m watching my world bleeding now, man
It´s all your fault, and you just don´t care
By 70 million years it was all the same
An old life goes to a new one come

1oneleo said...

That was my first experience with this kind of vocals :-)

ac said...

loved the vocals!! good stuff leo. despite the odd english little mistake (which can easily be corrected) that is a great take on a song that i was hoping someone developped. there's an ozzy feel to some parts that give it an old school sabbath feel, mixed with the more growly whispers that take it to a more modern side of music that i really enjoy