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(Soft Rock) Shelter (Bass, Drums, Lyrics, Vocals, Co-writer)
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Project initiated:
http://fjamstudios.blogspot.com/2009/02/soft-rock-shelter-bass-drums-lyrics.html<-- Click this
AC,
The song has more heart and soul with each listen. I'm attaching a very rough draft, first verse. Let me know if I'm even in the ball park - if I'm not I'll step aside and give someone else a chance, or maybe I'll take another point of view and try again. This tune has loads of potential. Phil
SHELTER - 1ST draft
See you – brush away the tears
Come back – rise above the fears
Walk with me
For another broken mile
I’ll set you free
…free from yourself
Shelter now
Shelter from the storm that’s brewin’
Break those…
Chains on your heart
Let me in
We’ll love again
We’ll love again
Either need separates so people can make their own custom mixes, or custom mixes. maybe both.
uploaded separates
Inngr8 has sent me a draft for lyrics which i have accepted. he is now on the roster as lyric writer.
Completed draft lyrics for Shelter. As the project progresses, I can make adjustments and do some rewrites, if required. Phil
Shelter version 2
V1
See you – brush away the tears
Come back – rise above the fears
Walk with me
For another broken mile
I’ll set you free
…free from yourself
V2
Shelter now
Shelter from the storm that’s brewin’
Break those…
Chains on your heart
Let me in
We’ll love again
Let me be yours
Chorus
You’ve been takin the high road, babe
Never thinking ‘bout
Where it really goes
The wind is howlin …
The rain is comin … down…
it’s comin down
I want to give you shelter from the storm
I want to be where
You’re gonna be yeah
Let me be your shelter
Let me be all ya need, be all ya need
V3
Begged you – not to walk away
You left – forever and a day
...come back…
Ya know there’s comfort in my arms
…come back…
To the comfort
V4
Shelter now
Shelter from the storm that’s brewin’
You gotta break those chains girl
Let me find
The key that makes ya mine
I want to be
Please let me be
Your shelter
Chorus
You’ve been takin the high road
Never thinking ‘bout
Where it really goes
But now…
The wind is howlin and
The rain is comin down
I want, I want, I want to give you shelter
You’ve been takin the high road
Never thinking ‘bout
Where it really goes
Shelter, shelter, shelter, shelter… I got to be
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